
A backbone and a rib,
The skeletal structure,
Covered by a soft and an elegant paper
In a diverse color pattern and profile.
A thin string is attached,
The stylish approach
Pulls the spirit of passionate nature,
To reach out everyone’s destination.
Blending the mind in the air,
A Kite Flyer never fails to fly a KITE, high,
Fascinating all the people around,
That high, the high ambition floats on the high,
In its journey of life,
Rejoices itself tussling in the air,
Delightfully the flyer and the Kite
Accompany themselves as A FREE,
A symbol of victory!
Sometimes the brutal force, wind
Hallucinates the direction of KITE,
And swiftly falls down somewhere
In other’s sight,
An absolute defeat and separation of the Flyer and the Kite!
Beautiful 🍁
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The kite is a symbol of human destiny. At least that’s what I see in your well-written poem.
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Beautifully written Kamal!🤩
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Nicely written 👍🤝
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MY KITE
simple, very simple structure
in the wind, carried to the sky, she rose
two sticks crossed
a skeleton called
thin but durable
clothed with fine paper
plus a long length of rope
and the creature dives into the sky
wind .. there is no flying wind
a long leash is held between heaven and earth
reality will not ground dreams
and we are so .. down to earth people
many observers
Few of fans of sensations
supposedly brave
belongs to the world .. isn’t it right?
how much you take, how much the world will give you
be a kite
cheerful brave
serious or frivolous
what you want – yourself
high in the clouds life
with good wind, carried
on endless strings of dreams
you hold them
you catch the wind
_______
Yes you are right
conqueror kite
the kite is a symbol
of freedom and victory
best regards 🙂
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lovely Kamal weaving the beauty of the kite as we take flight in our lives.. ❤️👏👏❤️ Cindy
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Lovely❤❤❤
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Thanks.🙂🙂🙂🙂
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It’s true. Thank you.🙂🙂🙂
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Thanks🙂🙂🙂
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Thanks.🙂🙂🙂
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Oh great!!!
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Yes. Thank you.🙂🙂🙂🙂
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Thanks.❤❤❤
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Yours was the inspiration. Thank you. Kind regards.
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❤️
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It’s my pleasure🙂🙂🙂
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Kamal, the soaring spirit, the humiliating crash. This metaphor beautifully describes life’s ups and downs! A very thought-provoking and powerful poem! ❤
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Thank you so much. I am happy to read your strong review of my poem. In my opinion, you are a good critic. 🙂🙂🙂❤
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Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.
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Kite a symbol of Victory, Very nice.
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Thank you. 🙏🙏🙏
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Excellent expression. 🌟✨💫
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Thank you.
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