-Kamal Shrestha, 26 July 2020; shyresk@gmail.com
(From the book, “A CRUCIAL Journey of LIFE Begins”)
When a shadow of trouble
Follows firmly to anyone,
Slowly and steadily
Increases one by one.
At first, they want to escape from one,
But cannot escape from that one,
As it hangs in line- next one
In the way, clings another one.
Desperately, they try to escape one by one,
Though they ignore any of one,
It sticks again, aside next one
Terrifying them making clone;
Though it’s difficult to escape
From all these ones.
They want to escape from a terrible one,
Spreads gossip about them
By one person to other one,
And the other to another one in chain.
Then, to the people all over around,
By social networks, all the things get surround;
Now, a terrible one becomes the biggest one,
Shocks badly, they yell at home.
To escape from that big one in whole,
Cries themselves, as it’s too late to bear these all.
Now, they cannot breathe finally,
Carrying the biggest loads, soul escapes;
The body remains deeply sleeping,
In this Earthly landscapes.
Beautifully penned.
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Thank you so much.
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Very beautiful and well-written poem, Kamal! I felt that!
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Thank you for your good words for me. Thanks.
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Beautifully described really heart touching. 👌🤗🤗🤗🙏
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You’re most welcome.
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Thank you so much for your good words of appreciation.
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Beautiful!!
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Well said ….
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Thanks.
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Thank you so much.😍😍
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This one is beautiful 😍
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Thank you for sharing this poem, and the others too, Kamal. I enjoyed browsing your blog with my morning coffee. Hugs on the wing.
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It’s my pleasure Teagan. Thank you so much.☕☕☕
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I think I might need a second cup of coffee today. LOL. Cheers.
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Really! You are amazing.☕☕☕
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Thank you so much.
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Nicee ❣️❣️
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Thank you
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This is well written. I can clearly see you have a passion for writing. Keep up the good work. Thankyou for the follow and the likes.
Good day
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